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Post by ncox10021 on Oct 29, 2008 19:04:08 GMT
hopefully MBT will post some of his photography on here..... it's amazing!
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Post by GoHomeGetDown on Oct 29, 2008 19:07:02 GMT
This is a poem I wrote when I was about 15. Is That You Knocking At My Door?
Every night I wait your call, every noise, squeak, tap, creaky floor, Is that you knocking at my door?
Will you come tonight? or phone, waiting patiently at my home, my home that's so empty, without your laughter, your body, your soul, it feels so bare, so still, so cold, Is that you knocking at my door?
Aw wow, that's beautiful!
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Post by whitewickerchair on Oct 29, 2008 19:07:25 GMT
totally! really good, I'm shit at writing
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Post by kat on Oct 29, 2008 19:08:17 GMT
^^^^that poem is lovely mrsnfollowill!
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Post by Jigglytuffy™ on Oct 29, 2008 19:11:37 GMT
totally! really good, I'm shit at writing Just try it. It's loads of fun and it's the only thing I'm good at.
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Post by schnucams on Oct 29, 2008 19:13:39 GMT
This is a poem I wrote when I was about 15. Is That You Knocking At My Door?
Every night I wait your call, every noise, squeak, tap, creaky floor, Is that you knocking at my door?
Will you come tonight? or phone, waiting patiently at my home, my home that's so empty, without your laughter, your body, your soul, it feels so bare, so still, so cold, Is that you knocking at my door?
Aw wow, that's beautiful! That is beautiful! I wrote a load of poems when I was 16/17 when i was having a shit time but I shredded them all later and now I really regret if Maybe Ill give it another go...............
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Post by mrsnfollowill on Oct 29, 2008 19:14:33 GMT
Thanks you guys I have never let anyone read these EVER, I was always too embarrassed. Here's another one Reality Of Love
And now you're here with me at last my dreams fulfilled forever vast so long ago so young now old I know now that our love is bold so rare but fair I'm glad I stayed and waited for this special day and may our love never leave or flee so free but instead may we love each other forever and ever and always be together and never change the way we feel this love we have at last is real.
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Post by kat on Oct 29, 2008 19:18:54 GMT
wow, you have a knack for poems mrsnfollowill! that was so lovely!
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Post by mrsnfollowill on Oct 29, 2008 19:24:11 GMT
Thanks, I think I spent most of my teenage years totally love sick, haha. I haven't written anything at all lately but after posting these on here, I think I may start again.
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Post by aha shake pepscake on Oct 29, 2008 19:27:19 GMT
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Post by kat on Oct 29, 2008 19:28:53 GMT
Thanks, I think I spent most of my teenage years totally love sick, haha. I haven't written anything at all lately but after posting these on here, I think I may start again. you really should , and share them on here too they're really good wow, pepscake i love those pictures, especially the second one!
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Post by Jigglytuffy™ on Oct 29, 2008 19:29:04 GMT
I have no artistic abilities really. I leave the drawing to my bro. Y'all are all really good.
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Post by kat on Oct 29, 2008 19:47:06 GMT
here are a couple of oldies i found
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Post by Deleted on Oct 29, 2008 19:51:28 GMT
I posted this in the other thread but I'm pretty pleased with it so I'll put it here too
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Post by Jigglytuffy™ on Oct 29, 2008 19:52:33 GMT
Aww, how cute. What does the lion symbolize?
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Post by Deleted on Oct 29, 2008 19:57:59 GMT
I guess it symbolises me boredom! I could've thought of something more deep to be honest >_< I just saw a picture of a lion whilst in Annie's house whilst her and her mum were sorting her new room out and thought hey, why not? I haven't drawn in ages so it was nice
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Post by GoHomeGetDown on Oct 29, 2008 20:04:57 GMT
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Post by kim111 on Oct 29, 2008 20:05:35 GMT
nice^^
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Post by GoHomeGetDown on Oct 29, 2008 20:05:50 GMT
Whoa, I didn't know those would come out so big^^^ Sorry!
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Post by kat on Oct 29, 2008 20:06:45 GMT
those photos are awesome!
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